Emeliano fix Ms Tapala it is surpose to be Ms Talepa. Fix the i's to a capital. When your writing do 2 spaces after the full stops. If this is Kauri Cafe from Term 1 or the other terms you should fix the date . It is not surpose to be another date not November. Good job on the blog post and do more blog posts. Fix the first sentence. On the the 3rd sentence fix the sentence too. Fix the end of the sentence because it has no full stop. Good Job though but edit the ones I told you too.
Hi Emeliano it's me Leipua I really enjoyed what you wrote but just like Healy said please double space after a ful stop, also can you please double check your writing before you post it on your blog. After all I really like, I also like how you included the little emoji's, Please fix the mistakes, thank you. :)
Emeliano fix Ms Tapala it is surpose to be Ms Talepa. Fix the i's to a capital. When your writing do 2 spaces after the full stops. If this is Kauri Cafe from Term 1 or the other terms you should fix the date . It is not surpose to be another date not November. Good job on the blog post and do more blog posts. Fix the first sentence. On the the 3rd sentence fix the sentence too. Fix the end of the sentence because it has no full stop. Good Job though but edit the ones I told you too.
ReplyDeleteHi Emeliano it's me Leipua I really enjoyed what you wrote but just like Healy said please double space after a ful stop, also can you please double check your writing before you post it on your blog. After all I really like, I also like how you included the little emoji's, Please fix the mistakes, thank you. :)
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